2003 Excellence in Journalism Awards
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Jayson Harper of Pacific Basin Communications picks up an award
The Hawaii chapter of the Society of Professional Journalists handed out the 2004 Excellence in Journalism awards June 19 at the Ala Moana Hotel.
The Ohio, Greater Oregon and Inland NW chapters of the Society of Professional Journalists judged the various categories.
D1 Business Reporting
First place: Lyn Danninger, Honolulu Star-Bulletin, A Costco for Health
Judges comments: Solid reporting uncovered severe shortcomings in a health care program offered to Hawai'i small business owners through a small business advocacy group.
Finalist: Matt Sedensky, The Associated
Press, Hawaii-fed Up Flyers
Finalist: Jaymes Song, The Associated Press, Hawaiian Weddings
D2 Spot News Reporting
First Place: Rod Antone, Mary Vorsino,
Peter Serafin, Gary Kubota, Tony Sommer, Honolulu Star-Bulletin,
Surf Wreaks Havoc
Judges' comments: It's not often that a weather story can compete in spot news, but the effort by the reporters at the Star Bulletin moved their coverage to the top. It shows good reporting, a thorough effort and first-class writing. This was a very competitive category.
Finalist: Honolulu Advertiser staff, The
Honolulu Advertiser, Chain Reaction Crash Kills Police Officer,
Finalist: Honolulu Advertiser staff, The Honolulu Advertiser, Police Officer Killed in Struggle with Fugitive
D3 General News/Enterprise Reporting
First Place: Matthew Thayer, The Maui
News, Bad Boy Seal Comes to Maui
Judge's comments: Clever writing and solid reporting made this an easy, rewarding read from beginning to end. The writer gave personality to the "tricky," "rambunctious" 300-pound monk seal that was "socializing" with Makena swimmers. The fact that the "slippery mammal" with a "bad-boy" reputation had a history of nipping people and escaping from federal marine life specialists not only made for a fascinating tale, it was news. And this news was told in an entertaining, informative style that gave the facts without interrupting the story. Giving human characteristics to the seal certainly stimulated interest in follow-up stories that gave readers a conclusion: a safe capture of the seal while he was "snoozing" and a plan to transport it far away from humans. Job well done.
Finalist: Vicki Viotti, The Honolulu Advertiser, Koreans Mark 100 Years in Hawaii.
D4 Feature Writing/Short Form
First Place: Mike Leidemann, The
Honolulu Advertiser, Christmas Comes to Kalaupapa in Summer
Judges comments: A strong visual of "Christmas" on the island as well as an understanding of the logistics of living on an island that receives all of its goods in one day. The writer also was skilled at positioning the current day life in terms of the historical uses of the island.
Finalist: Matt Sedensky, The Associated Press, Lingle's Faith.
D5 Feature Writing/Long Form
First Place: Michael Tsai, The Honolulu
Advertiser, Yao appeal soars
Judge's comments: A fun read. Playful and crisp; this is some of the best writing I've seen in a long time.
Finalist: Jennifer Hiller, The Honolulu Advertiser, Project Graduation
Finalist: Joleen Oshiro, Honolulu Star-Bulletin, Submissive Wives
D6 News Page Design
First Place: Michael Rovner, Honolulu Star-Bulletin, Toppled
Judge's comments: Classy design with a great use of a sequence of pictures. Lots of impact. Nice use of white space.
Finalist: Stephen Downes, Martha Hernandez, Greg Taylor, The Honolulu Advertiser, Battlefield: War in Iraq
Finalist: Michael Rovner, Honolulu Star-Bulletin, New Front
D7 Feature Page Design
First Place: Michael Rovner, Ruby
Mata-Viti, Craig Kojima, Honolulu Star-Bulletin, Shades of
Judge's comments: A great page with humorous photos and designed with impact. Photoshop shadows work well. Fun page for readers.
M1 Business Reporting
First Place: Paula Dobbyn, Environment Hawai'i, Permit Hurdles, Litigation Drag Down Plan to Log Koa
Judge's comments: Dobbyn, a reporter for the
Anchorage Daily News, worked as a journalist in residence with
the environmental newsletter for a month. She had never heard of
the koa tree until she arrived in Hawai'i. Her research uncovered
a trail of conservation violations and court cases that had gone
unreported. The story revealed a mass of suspicious land deals
and questionable accounting practices of large corporations that
resulted in one man's logging business being pushed
to the edge of bankruptcy.
Finalist: Jacy L. Youn, Hawaii Business, Making a Case for Coverage
Finalist: Hawaii Business, Are We Safe?
M2 Industry or Trade Reporting
First Place: John Heckathorn, Honolulu
Magazine, Classic Maui
Judge's comments: Crisp writing that made me want to visit all of these restaurants.
Finalist: Teresa Dawson, Environment Hawai'i, Moloka'i Protests Spotlight Cruise Industry Growth
First Place: Ronna Bolante, Hawaii
Business, Rising from the Ashes
Judge's comments: This story of a daughter with no business experience who is called upon to save the family store succeeds through excellent use of quotes and details. A good look at Jeanette Otsuka Chang and the strategy that revives the business.
Finalist: Constance Hale, Honolulu Magazine, Aaron Mahi
Finalist: Jacy L. Youn, Hawaii Business, Branching Out
M4 Feature Writing/Short Form
First Place: Ignacio Lobos, Island Scene Magazine, Just one breath
Judges comments: The writer took a routine assignment and turned it into a once-in-a-lifetime experience. He was not just content with observing the sport of free diving, he actually experienced it for himself and for the reader. Good job of capturing the moment.
Finalist: Les Peetz, Honolulu Magazine,
Finalist: Roland Gilmore, Hana Hou! Magazine, Painting The Good Life
M5 Feature Writing/Long Form
First Place: William Starr Moake,
Honolulu Magazine, Phantoms of the Sea
Judge's comments: The reader is quickly captured by this fascinating story of a missing fishing boat that is found nine years later and 2,300 miles away. In orderly fashion, we learn about the crew members, the storm in which their boat disappears and the subsequent search. But the eventual discovery of the boat provides a twist to the story that deepens -- not solves - the mystery. spellbinding.
Finalist: Naomi Sodetani, Hana Hou! Magazine, Way of the Warrior
Finalist: A. Kam Napier, Honolulu
Magazine, Searching for Mililani
M6 Page Design
First Place: Steve Shrader, Hana Hou! Magazine, Life is Sweet
Judge's Comments: Nice use of pictures. Type use was elegant and the well-designed layout is inviting and has lots of impact.
Finalist: Darrell Ishii, Spirit of Aloha, Everythings Laid Back in Rarotonga
Finalist: Wes Funai, Hawaii Business, Top 250: 20th Anniversary
M7 Magazine Cover
First Place: Garry Ono, Island Scene Magazine. Conquering Crack: An Addict Tells His Story
Judge's comments: Great illustration. Lots of impact with a hard-to-illustrate subject.
Finalist: Hana Hou! Magazine, Going Big
Finalist: Jayson Harper, Honolulu Magazine, 116th Holiday Annual
ND1 Business reporting
First Place: Kristen Sawada, Pacific Business News, HTA and HVCB stories
Comments: Sawada focused on the states bread-and-butter industry: Tourism. Her series was well reported with an emphasis on pushing the story forward into the post-Vericella era at the bureau. Im sure Sawada was facing intense daily competition on this story.
ND2 General news/Enterprise reporting
No award given
ND3 Feature writing
First Place: Gina Mangieri, Pacific Business News/KHON-2, The incomparable Hemmeter returns
Comments: Chris Hemmeter was one of Hawaiis most accomplished and influential developers. He had left Hawaii a decade earlier under publicly bitter terms and had refused to speak to the local press until the PBN/KHON package. This long-form print and television feature project represents a groundbreaking approach to news coverage between print and TV partners Pacific Business News and KHON-2.
ND4 Community reporting
No award given
I1 Online spot news reporting
First Place: Online staff, The Honolulu Advertiser, OTS, bus drivers reach tentative deal
Comments: The Honolulu Advertiser ran away with the online spot news reporting award for its round-the clock coverage of Honolulus bus strike. The newspaper outpaced its competition in this category because its entry was built around staff-produced stories posted in the middle of the night, showing the newspapers dedication to its readers no matter what hour.
I2 Online general news reporting (tie)
First Place: Online staff, The Honolulu Advertiser, Koreans in Hawaii 100 Years of Dreams, Accomplishments
First Place: Brent Suyama, TheHawaiiChannel.com, UH President Drops Logos
Comments: Two entries earned first place in this category because both took advantage of the medium to tell a compelling story. The online staff at the Honolulu Advertiser told a poignant story of the 100th anniversary of Korean immigration of Hawaii. The newspaper told a comprehensive story online with a time line dating back to the SS Gaelles docking, a calendar of celebratory events and a series of archived stories lasting 12 months. The Hawaii Channel.com took a similar approach with news stories about the University of Hawaiis proposed logo. The site solicited new logo ideas from readers and posted them online along with a slideshow.
P1 Column Writing/News
First Place: Rob Perez, Honolulu Star-Bulletin, Raising Cane
Judges comments: A close call. Volume of reporting and information with a healthy dose of attitude made the difference. Good sense of outrage that is not over the top.
Finalist: Lee Cataluna, The Honolulu Advertiser, Lee Cataluna
P2 Column Writing/Features
First Place: Tanya Bricking. The Honolulu Advertiser. About Women
Judges comments: Well-written, engaging, fresh. Instant connection with this reader. Not sappy or trite. Good voice.
Finalist: Mike Leidemann, The Honolulu Advertiser, Honolulu Advertiser About Men
Finalist: Ferd Lewis, The Honolulu Advertiser, Sports Columns
P3 Government reporting
First Place: Gordon Y.K. Pang, The Honolulu Advertiser, Is Dobelle failing to deliver?
Judges comments: A pointed but fair watchdog profile a month in advance of the University of Hawaii presidents job evaluation. Great Capitol sourcing, and a fun read despite its length. Also liked the "promises kept, unkept" sidebar and the well-designed timeline.
P4 Political reporting
No award given
P5 Breaking news reporting
First Place: Staff, The Honolulu Advertiser, Police officer killed
Comments: This package of Page One stories on a police shooting covered all the angles, from the straight-ahead mainbar to the profile of the slain officer; from the impact of the shooting on the neighborhood to the suspects criminal record. The mainbar was straight ahead, as it should have been. The sidebars were sensitive and deep. The package seamlessly wove in the news with historical data and context, a textbook example of teamwork in breaking a large story under deadline pressure.
P6 Sports reporting (Two winners)
First Place: Ann Miller, The Honolulu Advertiser. Michelle Wie Meeting celebrities, playing on the LPGA Tour: Life is Good
First Place: Staff, The Honolulu Advertiser. UH volleyball stripped of title
Comments: We decided to award two first places in this category because it was impossible to select one as better than the other. Both are excellent examples of sports writing at its best the breaking hard news story that affects many of the readers, and the well-crafted feature story that brings a person to life. The Advertiser staff made all the right moves in covering an obviously big story to its readers the decision by the NCAA to yank the championship volleyball trophy from the University of Hawaii. All the correct angles were covered; the stories were well written; the photographs were appropriate, and the graphic showing which schools had lost titles was just the right touch. An excellent piece of work. Just as was Ann Millers piece on Michelle Wie. It could have just been a story, but the other elements of the package helped make it exceptional ... the Q&A; her schedule; the autograph and the chronology ... all combined to make this a winner. And the story itself was very well written.
P7 Arts/Entertainment writing
No award given
P8 Editorial opinion
First Place: A. Kam Napier, Honolulu Magazine, Bold Resolve
Comments: The piece summed up the Legislatures stand in a national debate over the perceived erosion of civil rights under the Bush administrations Patriot Act, giving credit to the politicians who stood by their guns under tremendous political pressure. The writing was clear and articulate. It was not over the top or inflammatory. And most importantly, the piece called for a reasoned middle ground in an awkward era when even questioning political leaders was met with narrow-minded criticism.
Finalist: Stephanie Hickey, HPU Kalamalama, Peace movement: From concerned to involved
Comments: The writer took a refreshing angle on an important topic, challenging herself as she challenged others. The writing was clear and clean. This young writer shows promise of great things to come.
P9 Editorial cartoon
First Place: Corky Trinidad, Honolulu Star-Bulletin, Migawed
Comments: Intriguing, clean style and nice use of color put this in the first position.
Finalist: Dick Adair, The Honolulu Advertiser, Dick Adair
Comments: Excellent, amusing idea which was well-executed.
First Place: Stephen Downes, The Honolulu Advertiser, Happy is healthier
Comments: This is a unique concept for a story that is difficult to illustrate. It is executed very well. Great concept and great execution combined deserves first place award.
Finalist: Kip Aoki, Honolulu Star-Bulletin, H-Men Comic Book
P11 Informational graphic
First Place: David Swann, Honolulu Star-Bulletin, Your Body on Ice
Comments: Simple, clean direct, organized well, dynamic presentation.
P12 News photography
First Place: George Lee, Honolulu Star-Bulletin, Lights to Remember the Fallen
Comments: Photographer showed a creative approach, fresh perspective on what could have been a mundane assignment. The image is carefully and conscientiously composed in a situation which would seem to lend itself much time.
Finalist: Amanda Cowan, The Maui News, Fallen Hero
P13 Feature photography
First Place: Jeff Widener, The Honolulu Advertiser, Santas chair feels pretty bare
Comments: The photo makes a compelling juxtaposition using color, composition and emotion.
Finalist: Hana Hou! Magazine, Don Ho portrait
P14 Sports photography
First Place: Dennis Oda, Honolulu Star-Bulletin, Uemura Classic
Comments: This photographer took his seeing to the next level by looking beyond what might be the expected peak action to the culture around the sport. The image gives the viewer layers of information.
Finalist: Craig Kojima, Honolulu Star-Bulletin, A Hole in One Tree
P15 Photo essay
First Place: Lucy Pemoni, Honolulu Magazine, Backstage Beauty
Comments: The images convey a real sense of being behind the scenes and demonstrate a thoughtful journalistic process. The essay shows a range of experiences that contestants go through. Several images showed a level of trust and intimacy between the subjects and the photographer.
Finalist: Ayumi Nakanishi, Honolulu Star-Bulletin, Japan-Hawaii Style
P16 Investigative Reporting
First Place: Mike Gordon. The Honolulu Advertiser, Suffering in Silence: Hawaiis Elderly Victims`
Comments: Mike Gordons investigative series, "Suffering in Silence," stood out among the competition because it deals with true life-and death issues and because it takes on the inexcusable lethargy of state officials to pass meaningful laws regarding elder abuse and neglect. Gordon thoroughly documented the cases, provided vivid detail and fairly portrayed the dilemmas faced by many officials who found they were helpless in dealing with these cases. Most of all, the series helped lead to reforms that may well save lives.
Finalist: Patricia Tummons, Environment Hawaii, A Refuge in a Storm in South Kona
Comments: Investigative reporting is often defined as the revelation of news that some is trying to keep secret, and that is certainly the case here: Millions spent on a wildlife refuge that, by all accounts, has proven to be a fiscal disaster and environmental disappointment. The stories stood out among the competition because of Patricia Tummons dogged pursuit of public records and the deft way she uses them to explain what went wrong with the Kona refuge deal.
Finalist: A. Kam Napier, Honolulu Magazine, "Grading the Public Schools"
Comments: The trouble with Hawaiis public schools is widely known, but A. Kam Napiers story moves beyond generalizations to show that many schools excel while others continue to lag. Napiers story stood out for the degree of enterprise shown connecting public documents that were disparate and not all that meaningful when studied in isolation. This story carefully explains the methodology and provides information that readers can use to evaluate their schools and seek ways to improve them.
P17 Public service reporting
First Place: City Desk Staff, Honolulu Star-Bulletin, Ice Storm
Comments: No other topic dominated this category like that of crystal methamphetamine or "ice." The ice epidemic clearly has become a dominant issue if Hawaii. And while several news organizations published exhaustive series on the topic, none matched the thoroughness and depth of "Ice Storm" by the staff of the Honolulu Star-Bulletin. The series stood out in its public service by providing deep research and broad context to an issue of import. The series gave readers a sense of the history, impact and cost of meth at a time when Hawaiis leaders convened to seek solutions.
Finalist: Jim Dooley, Johnny Brannon, The Honolulu Advertiser, Secret Documents in Kamakana Case
Comments: Kudos to the Honolulu Advertiser for taking on an expensive and protracted legal battle to shine a light on hidden police records. The newspapers pursuit of disclosure is itself a worthy public service. The dogged work of the newspaper and the reporters showed a determination to hold officials accountable. The reporting, writing and presentation helped readers make sense of the documents that did become public
Finalist: Susan Essoyan, Honolulu Star-Bulletin, Schools Under Stress
Comments: That Hawaiis schools face serious problems is not itself news. But this series stood out among the competition because it went deep into carefully selected trouble spots within the school system -- from when children should begin in school, to the lack of clean and adequate restrooms. Money is often the core issue of many education stories. While it shows that funding is still a central concern, the series raises important issues about how priorities are set. The series provided a public service by zeroing in on issues where schools could make demonstrable change.
R1 General News
First Place: Kayla Rosenfeld, Hawaii Public Radio, Hoolaupahi
Comments: Kaylas piece on Hoolaupahi was a creative, informative look at the efforts to created a comprehensive history of native Hawaiian culture using the words of those who lived it. Effectively outlines the connection between todays Hawaiian youth and the elders who were part of a cultural existence that cannot be found in traditional history and books.
R2 Feature Reporting
First Place: Noe Tanigawa, KHPR, Sake Culture in Honolulu
Comments: Good use of music for flow. Good information. "Call to action" place to go! Sake I learned some things.
Finalist: Heidi Chang , KQED, The controversy over Kava, A Hawaiian Herbal Supplement
Comments: Topical and location issue oriented. Nice flow.
S1 News writing
S2 Feature writing
First Place: Emma Yuen, Environment Hawaii, Will Water Return to Kahoolawe?
Comments: Emmas story clearly was the top entry in this category. Her insightful piece was well-written and full of information. Her lead brings the reader in effortlessly and gives you an "upclose and personal" feel. Ive never been to Hawaii, but when I read this piece I felt like I was there. The key to her article was that it didnt read like a book report. It was polished, well organized and thorough. Good luck, Emma. You have the makings of a top-notch environmental journalist if you work hard.
T1 Government Reporting
First Place: Keoki Kerr, KITV 4 News, Bus Smart Card Contract Awarded to Campaign Supporter
Comments: Keoki Kerr explains a complicated tale of a questionable government contract with exceptional clarity. I hope he continues to pursue this story as it unfolds in time.
T2 Business Reporting
First Place: Britt Riedl, John Allen, KGMB 9, Dental Day Spa
Comments: Britt Riedl captures the relaxation of the day spa dentist through a terrific combination of photography and editing by John Allen. A reminder of televisions power to take viewers into the story.
Finalist: Mahealani Richardson, KITV 4 News, American Idol Union Turf Battle
Comments: Good pacing, good writing, good flow. Needed more perspectives and less of the obvious American Idol is big $; Hawaii wants a good image. Good future potential for this reporter
T3 General News/Enterprise Reporting
First Place: Keoki Kerr, KITV 4 News, Water Headquarters Security Easily Breached
Judges comments: This was a great enterprise story... on a very timely issue. Very bold for the TV station to run it when they were told not to. And it's great that the story actually resulted in more security. Kudos all around!
Finalist: Daryl Huff, KITV 4 News, Naked Statue
Judges comments: Great to see a reporter looking for a story even when they're on vacation. This was interesting and applicable to your market, and epitomizes an "enterprised" story.
Finalist: Darren Pai, Duncan Armstrong, KHNL News 8, Canal Cleanup
Judges Comments: Loved the fact that a man who would otherwise do an important, messy job unnoticed got some credit. Nice storytelling.
T4 Feature Reporting/Short Form
T5 Feature Reporting/Long Form
First Place: Gary Sprinkle, KITV 4 News, Mokulua Project
Comments: Informative. Great visuals. ... Made topic interesting by bringing it closer.
Finalist: Cindy Paliracio, Duncan Armstrong, KHNL News 8, Gift of Life
Comments: Good setup.
T6 Investigative Reporting
First Place: Louise Kim McCoy, George Hurd, Chris Skapik, Glenn Holcomb, John Allen, KGMB 9, Eye on Hawaii Special Report on GHB Part I and II
Comments: Nicely produced. great lighting, nice camera shots, good setup on reporter stand-ups. The shot in the nightclub to show how hard it was to read the test results was a nice touch.
Good, solid information broken down in an easy-to-understand way. You get the sense that the reporter really did her homework and knew the subject so well that she could explain it to almost anyone. I think it also contributed to how concisely everything was presented ... not to much information ... not too little.
Sound bites from the lab technician and the medical examiner were light on the "tech-speak" and also easy to understand.
Made the point ... dont rely on the test, rely on common sense ... by letting the story unfold.
T7 Series Reporting
No award given.
First Place: Kenneth E.T. Chong, KITV 4 News, Mixed Plate: The Great Western War
Comments: Judges liked the open video and editing. Nice use of music and letting the video breathe to take time to watch the action.
Finalist: Duncan Armstrong, KHNL News 8, Forgotten Ship
Finalist: Kenneth E.T. Chong, KITV 4 News, Pohakuloa Live Fire Training
T10 Special News Program
First Place: Gary Sprinkle, KITV 4 News, Pacific Adventures: Kauai
Judges comments: This special was top notch. Great storytelling, editing and photography. At the end, I felt like I'd learned about how the past and future are tied together. I loved all the "color" in the pieces and the use of natural sound as well. It was like watching a National Geographic Special.
Finalist: Daryl Huff, KITV 4 News, Fighting School Failure
Judges comments: Great to see a local station tackle such an important issue. It was great to compare the schools to the ones in Virginia. It is evident a lot of work went into this.
T11 Public Service Reporting
First Place: Gary Sprinkle, KITV 4 News, Pacific Adventures: Pohnpei
Comments: While I question this piece being entered in the "public service reporting" category, I still found it to be the most compelling of the three. The topic was interesting. The script was well written, yet simple to follow. The interviews were unique and added greatly to the piece. The shooting and editing were simple, but worked. There were a few too many zoom-outs for my taste, however. In general, this was a piece that as a viewer could have held my interest and would have made me feel smarter after watching it.
Finalist: Daryl Huff, KITV 4 News, Fighting School Failure
Comments: The topic was certainly an ambitious one and fit this category the best of all three entrants. The comparison with the school district in Virginia was also excellent. I, however, was curious as to why we saw what was going right in Virginia before we looked at what was wrong in Hawaii. Logically, I would like to have seen the "problem" and then the "solution." The piece on teacher retraining was specifically a solid package. I felt the reporter did a comprehensive job looking at the issue, interviewing the people with the most important opinions and firsthand knowledge. The reporter-anchor interaction should have been cut, or done so it was less staged and more natural.